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Untitled
Contributed by
freckle
on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 10:22:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Day dawns silently upon
a sleepy sea
A wind blown craft sails
quietly upon small waves
The early morning birds
fly fleetingly from it’s bow
A small wind causes it
to toss a little
I am awakened by a sunbeam
shining through the cabin window
I arise and hear the morning
cries of gulls
In this early morning beauty
I stand on deck, looking homeward
and think of you.
Carol L.Chadwick
Sept.3,1980
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freckle
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2005-04-05 22:22:17]
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Re: Untitled
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 10:29:11 PM AEST
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This is refeshingly beautiful and touches my
heart, your getting better all the time not in a
manner of skill but your subject content and
the feeling in the words put u in a new light
your getting more artsy . . .
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Re: Untitled
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 01:03:48 AM AEST
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A nicely written piece Carol. As for title maybe
Home Bound or maybe Sailing Homeward?
I hope these may help u.
Otherwise a great write.
Hugs,
Sue |
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Re: Untitled
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 06:58:18 AM AEST
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Early Morning Beauty
I like the feel of this write...peaceful and anticipation...just lovely! |
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Re: Untitled
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 07:35:44 PM AEST
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Splendid imagery and aura about this. I like it much.
Andrew |
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