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Shadowed by Inner Demons
Contributed by
essentially9
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Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 10:01:42 PM in AEST
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Shadowed by Inner Demons
The shadows of a tear
Are gleamless in their hopelessness.
The darkness intensifies with fears
Leaving wake of loneliness.
The past was never left behind,
And my future is for a wasted life.
The present slowly dies,
And blood taints the sands of time.
The shadows of what could be
Are drowned in the tears of blood.
The suffocation by the red sea
Brings death to what was never enough.
My life is only wasting away,
And I just let it fade.
My life is so full of hate,
And it takes so little for one to fray.
It takes so little before one dies
From the shadows that were cried.
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Re: Shadowed by Inner Demons
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 10:08:19 PM AEST
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This is a magnificent peice of writting u r an
excellant writer deep penitrating emotions
that reach out along with your voice i can
hear as i read this . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Shadowed by Inner Demons
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by ForeverAlone on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 10:27:31 PM AEST
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Ah....I could say I don't like this...yet I only would be lying to myself...so...as....always...I become....a...broken...record....
Clark...=] |
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Re: Shadowed by Inner Demons
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by TheVoice on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 10:39:59 PM AEST
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Jennifer,
This is truly amazing.
The Voice
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Re: Shadowed by Inner Demons
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 10:58:10 PM AEST
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Very emotional and from the heart. Beautifully done! Sounds like there is some concern about your life being wasted.
A great poem,
Will |
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Re: Shadowed by Inner Demons
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 01:50:53 AM AEST
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Full of despair and sad emotions..drags into
Aww..... dear lady..is there no end for the misery of an angel?. venkat |
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Re: Shadowed by Inner Demons
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 03:39:31 AM AEST
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Full of emotions and very sad.
great write as always. |
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Re: Shadowed by Inner Demons
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 07:03:37 AM AEST
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So despairing with great depth...
Oh so well done.
I especially liked the blood and tears aspect of it ;)
But seriously, this is so.....full!!! I just wish it was happier.
Awsome Job Jenn! |
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Re: Shadowed by Inner Demons
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by fielding88 on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 08:00:30 PM AEST
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| Again, great stuff. Emotional write that conveys so many feelings that come from that one particular theme. Oddly enough, that second stanza seemed to strike such a strong chord with me, it might even measure up to the brilliance of the conclusion of yours, (lol btw, i loved the conclusion :P ) all of which were entirely relatable. I've been through situations such as these, where all avenues are open, but never walked for whatever reason, and it's so constricting. Loved this piece. |
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Re: Shadowed by Inner Demons
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by badgurlinoz on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 10:55:44 PM AEST
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"My life is only wasting away,
And I just let it fade.
My life is so full of hate,
And it takes so little for one to fray."
These 4 simple lines explain how i have felt many many times over the last few yrs .
Your poem reached deep inside of me and touched something I had long forgotten I had .
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.
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Re: Shadowed by Inner Demons
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by tx_graffiti_gal on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 09:48:37 PM AEST
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| aweeeeeeeee... the past comes and bites you.. you may feel the pain still.. but but but so many years ahead to do things different and smile... you have time when you have breath in you... |
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