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Raining
Contributed by
badgurlinoz
on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 09:51:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Here I lay on my single bed
In my new single life
Staring out of my single window
Hoping to escape this internal strife
I'm stuck at the proverbial crossroads
between the future and the past
Standing in a place called Loneliness
how long will this emptiness last
Lost in a desolate wilderness
with no compass, no map, no guide
Sliding down an emotional slippery dip
then washed back up again with the tide
I've lost all focus and direction
I'm clean out of self-faith
Scared of everything and everyone
Friendships torn, scattered and misplaced
My glazed eyes are wide open
but I can't see a single thing
And although it's deathly quiet
I can't hear this cold heart sing
Lost inside what I wish was merely a dream
I don't like where I am now
it's a dark and dreary hole,
Cant find anyway back
It's heavy, suffocating, constricted
and it's raining in my soul
Copyright ©
badgurlinoz
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2005-04-05 21:51:27]
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Re: Raining
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 10:02:14 PM AEST
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This is powerful, full of deep emotion and very well expressed. It;s good to have you here my friend :o)
Very well done
Roses at your feet
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Re: Raining
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 10:26:13 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC....
This is so sad, but so well written. I am glad you are around to post it...and hope that the sun is shining down on you now....
Hugs,
Jenni |
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Re: Raining
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by badgurlinoz on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 03:08:09 AM AEST
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thanks guys for your feedback .
Am glad I am able to share this with you . |
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Re: Raining
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by WiltingSoul on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 10:26:13 AM AEST
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| i really like this, it's written beautifully, keep it up. |
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