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The Antidote to my Pain
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
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Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 09:09:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I fell for a girl that said she had poison in her veins
But is all the more of the antidote to my pain
She said she had nothing for me to be able to love
But I could'nt help but feel I could'nt tell her enough
She said she loved me more then I could ever know
But the feeling I feel is the same and it will always show
She was ripped from my arms that morning she was took away
As she left so fast "I love you" was the only thing I could say
She is my angel and she saved my life from death
As no matter how long it takes to get her back....in my heart she will always rest
Because her so called "poison" still resides in me
And the pain I once had, is now nothing but a memory
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My love...I say...
You and me...for eternity
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
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2005-04-05 21:09:51]
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Re: The Antidote to my Pain
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 10:07:02 PM AEST
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| im going for a nonbacked comment here, its going to be hard, lol. im glad to see that you dont think things for granted, because many people do, and especially me. it is true that you dont know what you have until its gone, but you knew before she was gone. that means you never took her or your time for granted. and on to ramble on about your poem. i liked it, it wasnt as powerful as some of your others, but it still had power. the ending was brilliant, and a perfect one for this piece. and your ending has made this a masterpiece. |
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Re: The Antidote to my Pain
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 10:07:59 PM AEST
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| non backhanded....::sigh:: ::wonders if it was backhanded at all:: |
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Re: The Antidote to my Pain
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by TheVoice on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 10:57:42 PM AEST
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This is one that touches deep. Great piece.
The Voice
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Re: The Antidote to my Pain
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 03:56:03 AM AEST
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Stunning stuff here!
Touching, emotional, brilliant...all words of that kind suddenly spring to my mind..
Awesome, and written deeply, loved it.
your fan..
~kt |
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