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blue magnolia
Contributed by
ipanema_gal
on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 08:45:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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through the frosted windows
site the flower of winter so sweet
a friend if i ever had one
her eyes
deep and black as coal
her hair
a shade of silver
tattered and frayed
her hands they shake
blue lips tremble
i knew her so long ago
id offer her a hand
but my hands, once strong
now tremble to
so i watch my blue magnolia
as she withers beneath the snow
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Re: blue magnolia
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 10:39:20 AM AEST
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I liked this. And, I love magnolias. They are hardier than you think.
This was a very moving and insightful poem.
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Re: blue magnolia
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by kcampbell on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 10:09:08 AM AEST
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| Amazing. You are a very talented writer, I really love this one. |
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