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JOSEY

Contributed by BEBE on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 06:16:30 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Daddy is on his way!
Remember that day
I heard you say
"I am at my house alone, Mama leaves me here to go out and play.
Right then,
I dropped to my knees and instantly prayed.
We are comin' for you baby.
No more being alone, Im sorry their mean
But Josey your going to be clean, as soon as your in my arms.
For Gods sake your only four years old,
you shouldnt have to make sure weather your mama is hot or cold.
You be the little girl that you are
shining like a star.
I love you baby, and were on our way.

Copyright © BEBE ... [ 2005-04-05 18:16:30]
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Re: JOSEY (User Rating: 1 )
by xtremcalibur on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 08:29:38 PM AEST
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I think with a little more thought and rewording some of it, you would have a very heart-felt write. It saddened me as I followed the words. It is a good write but needs a little more thought and then it could be a beautiful write. Thank you for sharing your words.

Re: JOSEY (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 10:39:29 PM AEST
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What a sweet peice of writting the feeling of

hope longing and despair conveyd 2 a baby

from one who cares beautifuly done . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: JOSEY (User Rating: 1 )
by sandysandysandy on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 10:25:03 PM AEST
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so much fear was in my life growing up. as I read this poem of yours.. feelings came up within me. great write.

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