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In the Time it Takes to Breathe
Contributed by
gabby521
on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 05:37:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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In the time it takes for you to breath
One sweet solitary breath of air
I've said your name one hundred times
And reminded myself that you're not there
To hear my desperate lonely cries
In the time it would have taken you to hear
The words "I love you" cross my humbled lips
I've breathed one too many times, cried one too many tears
And remembered too often your warm embrace,
Your precious kiss
In the time it took you to say we're through,
My heart was crushed one hundred times,
But sure enough, I'm over you.
My heart continues to emphasize
That in the time it takes to breath your name,
I've already moved on another day.
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gabby521
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2005-04-05 17:37:40]
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Re: In the Time it Takes to Breathe
(User Rating: 1 )
by Urizen on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 06:18:31 PM AEST
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| Stunningly Sad, Stunningly beautiful, you have a real way with words, Thank you for sharing. xx |
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Re: In the Time it Takes to Breathe
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by Kay-Kay on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 06:56:32 PM AEST
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SUCH AN EMOTIONAL POEM I LIKE IT. I WRITE A LOT OF EMOTIONAL POETRY, I KNO HOW YOU FEEL WITH THE WHOLE BREAKUP THING NICE WRITE HOPE YOU'LL BE OK
~Kay-Kay |
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