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The Free Bird
Contributed by
tollo
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Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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I looked up at a tree one day,
and saw a bird that looked very free,
I put him in a cage
then his face started turning bage,
then I took him out to play,
and he flew away,
very far away.
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tollo
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2002-12-21 08:00:00]
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Re: The Free Bird
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by gina on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 10:18:26 AM AEST
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mmm i guess the funny part is taking the bird out of the cage thinking he wants to play , but he flew:) , no? if not where 's the funny part ?
GINA
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Re: The Free Bird
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by OreO on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 01:26:21 PM AEST
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This was cute tollo, i forgot in the last poem i read of yours to welcome you to YPDC...Keep em' coming...i look forward to reading more of your poetry...
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Re: The Free Bird
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 11:55:35 PM AEST
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| HI TOLLO, THIS IS GOOD.RICHARD |
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Re: The Free Bird
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by emmafarah on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 03:27:06 AM AEST
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good!!! first shot @ poetry i can tell! good start
i love the beige part
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