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.-.its just an outline on a bedspread.-.

Contributed by guts_n_glitter on Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 03:08:17 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

The night clouds cover loneliness
Tick followed tock
Your not here, I’m not here
In a dream world by myself
Your not there, I’m not there
Its just an outline on a bedspread
An empty space in my memory
I thought it was over
I thought I was strong
I thought you were the past
I thought very wrong
Not the you knew
But forgive me for trying to forget
Forgive me for leaving us
Its easy to blame the fault on someone else
But I know it was mine
I never knew how much you meant to me
And I guess that saying is true
‘.you dunno what you got till its gone.’
But what’s done is done
Cant bare to let you go
I feel incomplete without you
Yer everyone says it
And I believe it
And I hope it will work out fine
I dream we will be together again for real
Holding hands
And throwing arms around our necks
And sharing kisses in those private moments
And just to sit there in silence knowing what each other are thinking
Knowing that we don’t need words
And if we don’t
It will be hard
Hard to see you with another gurl
Her holding you in her arms
Please ignore the tear running down my face
Because deep down maybe I knew it was never meant to be
And she will be a very lucky gurl
Cos you are a beautiful person

Copyright Â© guts_n_glitter ... [ 2005-04-05 15:08:17]
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Re: .-.its just an outline on a bedspread.-. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 05:49:06 AM AEST
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A bit sad but beautifully written.
huggs,
emy

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