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Heckle and Hide
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 02:53:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Know they what has been done?
Nay, tis not possible
But the rain
how do you miss the rain?
With certain sense to be sheltered, safe inside
Would then, not it be seen upon the pane?
Curtains drawn, and all abed, witness to nothing
Oblivious to all, which happens about them
Your secret remains safe
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Will I give myself away?
Most assuredly, if you continue with your prattle
But this burning inside of me, I need to speak of it
Someone must hear what I have done
Would you have yourself persecuted for it?
But of course not, it should be
celebrated
And all will see it such?
The thunder of the deed shall fall prey to those
Whose voices cry out above it for justice
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But
how can that be?
They will envy you and want your illumination
But I see in bursts of light, flashes dancing cross the sky
No matter, for they will all want to steal a ride
And search out any means by which to get one
What I have done they can all recreate
That you have it now, means more if they can spirit it away
They do not comprehend what it will take to nurture
How to make it grow, how to let it live
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Surely there is one who knows
who dreams the same?
Indeed there is
and that one
is growing in power
Of what concern should that be mine?
That one exists, already within you
And your ability to control your actions is faltering
But you
you were created to keep me strong
Can we
can we alter this course of events?
The stage has been set, the die is cast, the pieces all in play
Would you then have me kill yet another?
Perhaps one who finally understands?
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No !!! There will be no more murder of innocence !!!
I shall have no more part in this charade !!!
I can hide, yes
that is what I shall do
Hide, as you attempted from me?
Ha!
You will recall that I found you hiding
weak, near to giving up
I convinced you to carry on, continue the hunt
But this, is this what I have been searching for so long?
How will you know if you do not face it?
It matters little really, yea or nay
For from the truth
You can only hide
So long
Copyright Β©
Nazmythian
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Re: Heckle and Hide
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by waos on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 03:11:36 PM AEST
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That was gorgeous, a masterpiece, you did a really good job of
showing the conflicts that people have inside their own minds.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, and it's definitely something
I will return to to focus on again and again. it's a favorite of all I've
read on this site. Awesome job.
~Waos/Kara |
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Re: Heckle and Hide
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 03:21:07 PM AEST
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*sigh*
All my favourite poems boggle my mind... I guess that makes this one of my faves.
Seriously. This is...unusual, and I love trying to get my mind round it. lol.
These poems really are the best ones, they are real, and they are you.
I really love this.
Great write hun,
Phil xxxxxx |
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Re: Heckle and Hide
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 04:05:13 PM AEST
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Nazzy, are you trying to dazzle me everytime you write something new
Cause im telling you know it's working.
This was really really good, everything works all together making such an incredible poem.
Jane |
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Re: Heckle and Hide
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 12:42:57 PM AEST
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Reason and Insanity...is that who they are. I think I've heard their discussions echoing across the world for some time now.
This is really incredible Scott. You have a very unique and original mind that is reflected freshly in your work! |
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Re: Heckle and Hide
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by freckle on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 04:59:32 PM AEST
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Very enjoyable and contemplative. Ah, the voices...they never really go away, do they? Another fine write.
Carol |
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Re: Heckle and Hide
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 05:13:13 PM AEST
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There's magic in this, Nazzy... but then, some part of you knows that already, doesn't it?
Oh! prattle on, dear Nazzy... please, please do. Something just tells me that in doing so, you will take hold of the power and a new sort of strength will come as a result.
Picturing you on the edge of a cliff, contemplating whether or not to leap and wanting to whisper... "it's the only way, Naz... to learn to fly".
~Snem~ |
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Re: Heckle and Hide
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 05:53:05 AM AEST
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Wow, u r very creative,
Awesome, amazing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Heckle and Hide
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 01:35:40 AM AEST
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| I must of been asleep the past month to miss this.Dazzling is right. |
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