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THE SEA
Contributed by
GALIT
on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 02:34:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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IT'S SUCH A BEAUTIFUL VIEW,
AND IT'S SO RELAXING.
YOU CAN HEAR THE SOUNDS OF THE WAVES,
AND YOU WILL FEEL THE QUIET EVERYWHERE.
YOU CAN HAVE A SWIN IN THE SEA,
DURING THE HOT SUMMER DAYS.
AND AT NIGHT,
IT'S GREAT TO WALK ON THE SAND!
IF THE WEATHER IS GOOD,
THEN YOU CAN SURF IN IT, TOO.
YOU'LL BE ABLE TO CATCH
ALL THE BIG WAVES!
AND WHEN THE SUN GOES DOWN,
IT'S THE MOST BEAUTIFUL VIEW THAT YOU CAN EVER SEE.
THE SUNSET, BY THE SEA!
Copyright ©
GALIT
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2005-04-05 14:34:54]
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Re: THE SEA
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 02:57:43 PM AEST
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Welcome to Your_Poetry.Com...
The sea is all this and more.....
Nice write...
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Re: THE SEA
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 03:33:18 PM AEST
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a lovely write, I love the sea. welcome to the site :)
pix xx |
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Re: THE SEA
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 05:04:40 AM AEST
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welcome to you poetry dot com.
I know you would like to know more about me.But i don't send photos and my address to people i don't really know sorry.
If you would like to get to know me you can either pm me here or talk to me in the forums.ok?
anyways good poem.
hope to read more of your writes.
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Re: THE SEA
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by Arden on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 02:42:59 PM AEST
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simple poem to say the least. maybe be a bit more discriptive? lose the caps, its kinda annoying. nice poem though. 3/5
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