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Believe
Contributed by
tollo
on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 07:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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As i look across the sky,
I started to cry,
for all the folks
who lost their lives,
for all the people
who fought tell the very end,
for all the kids
who had to suffer,
for all the infents growing up
not even knowing their own mother,
for all the living things
who had to watch their country cover in red,
nothing to eat ,
not even a crumb of bread,
watching in misery
hopeing to find an end,
but yet they never gave up
for they have the power of God on their side,
and as long as they believe
they end is very near.
Copyright ©
tollo
... [
2002-12-21 07:40:00]
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Re: Believe
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by Sumiko on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 12:18:05 PM AEST
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| Nice. You have a good talent. Keep developing. |
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Re: Believe
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by OreO on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 01:22:23 PM AEST
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Well hello tollo i really enjoyed reading this poem, this poem has a good message behind it and some strong wording...thanks for sharing it i think it's a beautifully written poem....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Believe
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by emmafarah on
Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 02:20:47 AM AEST
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| oh my god... i didn't know my little tollo could write some thingso ...emotional. and powerful. thanx, dude...that really hits home:P |
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