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Small World
Contributed by
Red_October
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Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 02:34:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The seam inbetween us like an invisible divide:
intricately laced through each other's minds...
we are a mysterious potential too far apart,
I was never your ending ~ but may be your demise
A rare occasion to compromise ~ Striking, not like me...
just a disillusioned girl
used to fighting.
But if I was your whole world,
I could give you some control...
Your world would fit right inside your arms
and we would both be full.
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Red_October
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2005-04-05 14:34:10]
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Re: Small World
(User Rating: 1 )
by jonteD on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 10:35:16 AM AEST
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Re: Small World
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Tuesday, 12th July 2011 @ 03:07:48 PM AEST
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Well I must say you have written out your true feelings intricately and have created a masterpiece of romantic literature. I commend you for many cannot Successfully do this. Keep on writing and God bless you,
Deidra |
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