|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
I Promise
Contributed by
Curtisc
on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 01:31:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
|
I promise to love you for as long as I live,
In this life and in death too.
I promise to give you all that I can give,
I'll always be here for you.
I'm not going to let anything take you away,
my life means nothing without you.
With you I look forward to each new day,
it doesn't get any better than a love so true.
You tickle me, bite me, and mess up my hair,
and you love it how I don't get mad.
But that's because of the perfect love we share,
how can I get mad at the best I've ever had?
I love laying with you and watching you sleep,
your breath is music to my ears.
Those are moments I cherish and keep,
ones I'll never forget for all of our years.
Copyright ©
Curtisc
... [
2005-04-05 13:31:22]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: I Promise
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 03:48:41 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Beautiful declaration of love..
Jenni |
|
|
Re: I Promise
(User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 01:29:53 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Aww this was soooo heartfelt, I wanted to cry...but i didn't...lol. I really envy the love that u guys have for each other. It's great how u got ur feelings down on paper. Tanya |
|
|
Re: I Promise
(User Rating: 1 )
by angel_eyes70 on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 10:57:29 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| i really loved that poem, i almost cried. i know how you feel. love hurts but it is a wonderful feeling to have. anyways nice write, i loved it |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
