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The Thief
Contributed by
justjonesy
on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 02:01:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Some say I could have stopped this crime
but I swear it happened too fast
as I watched her escaping
escaping her past
just in time
just.....
in time
And some say shes trespassed these walls before
but I swear shes just looking for light
as i watched her steal this heart
steal this heart tonight
just once for
just.....
once more
Copyright ©
justjonesy
... [
2005-04-05 02:01:20]
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Re: The Thief
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 06:30:03 PM AEST
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| Wonderful write. The flow was great and I also loved the structure. 5 stars from me :-) |
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Re: The Thief
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by Kie-Kie on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 12:30:46 AM AEST
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I thought you said I was a better poet?
Definately not true... this was a WONDERFUL write :D
*huggles*
Love ya,
~Kiela~ |
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