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A mess Of A poem from a mess of a world
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 01:41:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Half alive just existing
No where to go no way to be
That is right for anyone other than me
Then you came around
Cleared my head full of drought
Brought life back into my world
In your heart you made a home for me
Because of you because you cared
I found
All the things that I could be
Just with the sound
Of your first words made me devout
You talk me down, calm me down
When I am too strung out to sleep
Don’t think just coz I understand
I care there is more to it that that
There is more to us than that
I can see like nothing else
In me you're better than I want to be
I take whatever you're giving, not enough
I take all that you are no matter how tough
Give me your past coz I’m your future
Give me your world coz I’m your suitor
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Re: A mess Of A poem from a mess of a world
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 02:03:11 AM AEST
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Hey there, my friend, nuthing wrong with this write.
It's great as always.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: A mess Of A poem from a mess of a world
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 06:36:07 AM AEST
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| It's not a mess..it sounds like it's coming straight out of your mind....that's what my mind looks like when I think about love |
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Re: A mess Of A poem from a mess of a world
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by Spike on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 07:17:31 AM AEST
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Speaks straight from the heart. Just the right blend of realism and optimism. I've felt the same way.
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