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Lonely Shores of Regret
Contributed by
bobotheclown
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Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 01:00:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Shipwrecked upon these lonely shores
Left to bleed over these tortured sands
Blinded by the grit that chafes my eyes
After I wiped away the tormenting tears
All alone with the madness in my mind
The madness that stalks me
And tears me apart willfully
Crucifying me to my past failures
Forcefed an excess of lies
Lacking the truth I lie hidden,
Hidden behind my scars (bars)
So the "normal" ones do not fear
Kneeling on these wounded sands
Weeping out my every regret
Beneath the blackened night
The stars my only witness
Copyright ©
bobotheclown
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2005-04-05 01:00:25]
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Re: Lonely Shores of Regret
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 01:18:41 AM AEST
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WOW Joel.... I loved this.....
First off, I thought the Title was so inviting....
Your imagery....simply amazing...
Thank you..I wish I'd written this....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Lonely Shores of Regret
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by Doriens_Picture on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 01:33:58 AM AEST
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yo bobo how be ye
i like this lots but wish it had some kind of rhyme sceem to it i know its hard sometimes but i know you could do it |
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Re: Lonely Shores of Regret
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by justjonesy on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 02:07:21 AM AEST
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| great poem.....just an awesome job...best one ive read tonight by far |
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Re: Lonely Shores of Regret
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by mina-1 on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 02:21:22 AM AEST
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a very well written piece of poetry. The image u cast in the readers head is absolutely sensational. A sad, but excellent written poem. Well done.
Hugs,
Sue |
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Re: Lonely Shores of Regret
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 07:51:17 AM AEST
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You just keep getting better and better and I cannot keep up with your mastery.
I want to quote the whole poem.
I felt emotions and you related them, expressed them, so strongly that the scene unfolded itself in my mind.
Now thats poetry...
Kie |
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Re: Lonely Shores of Regret
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 08:00:43 AM AEST
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deep and so very sad. written from your heart,
pix xx |
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Re: Lonely Shores of Regret
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 04:19:46 PM AEST
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Joel, you do amaze me when you write something so fresh and beautiful.
YOu do know to make such a beautiful creation of poetry.
I love this and i wish i wrote it. LOL
Jane |
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Re: Lonely Shores of Regret
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by freckle on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 08:10:41 PM AEST
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Great write Joel. I love all the ways you used the sand. Very descriptive and emotional write.
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Re: Lonely Shores of Regret
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 04:33:34 AM AEST
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This is beautifully sad..
I can relate, I love how it feels to read. |
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Re: Lonely Shores of Regret
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 05:35:08 PM AEST
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'Hidden behind my scars (bars)'
wonderful...x |
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