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I Cry
Contributed by
sweetncaring
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Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 11:07:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I cry with the loss of another
day that has already passed
to know that the time I came to
visit you was my very last
I said goodbye and walked
out the door with tears glistening
in my eyes trying to hold them
back so you wouldn't see me
cry I didn't want you to know
that your death meant so much
I didn't want you to see how
much I hurt inside whenever I
sat and cried the days have passed
that you are gone with the thoughts
of your death and all that you have
left behind I cry now just thinking
of you another day has passed and
the pain is still strong.
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sweetncaring
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2005-04-04 23:07:49]
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Re: I Cry
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 11:17:58 PM AEST
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| this is sad. you convey the emotions well. Very nicely written, and im sorry for your loss. |
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Re: I Cry
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by justjonesy on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 02:55:19 AM AEST
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| this is soooo sad....great job |
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Re: I Cry
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by sweetoccasion29 on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 10:59:50 AM AEST
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| HANG IN THERE |
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