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A dream is...
Contributed by
FearMyRawr
on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 10:30:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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A dream is
A fantasy
Unreliable
A liar, a cheater
What you think is there
Really isn't
What you think is real
Is truly false
A deciever
Playing tricks on your senses
An optical illusion
An altered world
A parallel universe
Where everything is right
When in reality
Everything is wrong
Or even where
Everything is wrong
When in reality it's right
Unfatithful
A betrayer
Filled with dishonesty
An escape
Sometimes the only one
For those who are afraid
Of death
Copyright ©
FearMyRawr
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2005-04-04 22:30:13]
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Re: A dream is...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 10:44:20 PM AEST
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| This is good. really good, and true. though sometimes, i think the last line could be "of life" but it still fits and all. nicely done. |
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Re: A dream is...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 06:41:16 AM AEST
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| Very bitter...a good write-your emotional release is evident.. |
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Re: A dream is...
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by BabyTears89 on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 01:46:18 PM AEST
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Your a great writer, this is a very nice piece, keep writing.
*~BabyTears89~* |
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