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Fallen Deeply
Contributed by
Kay-Kay
on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 10:04:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Going into a trans when i think about your gentle touch
Hugging my pillow in your place boy i loved you so much
Your tender kisses are all gone and i can't stand to cry any more
Every night i wish that you could be here and we could have what we had before
But things change fast and i wanted to stop it so bad
Now it's too late to do anything and i was left so sad
You gave me everything that i wanted and you were so sweet
Every time i see or think about you my heart begins to beat
I'm cutting it short because i'm truly missing you
But just to let you know everything i said is true
~Kay-Kay
Copyright ©
Kay-Kay
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2005-04-04 22:04:07] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Fallen Deeply
(User Rating: 1 ) by reflections on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 07:36:12 AM AEST (User
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Love does indeed rule the universe doesn’t it Kay-Kay? Even love lost, though painful, can be a cherished memory. You have made that point in an eloquence reserved for those with the ability you so aptly display with this wonderful poem. Keep wording your heart, and your success as a poet is all but guaranteed.
John
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