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A Demon Come to Visit Me
Contributed by
AtomicPromIse
on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 09:41:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The sky is black,
But it’s only noon,
I’ve turned nocturnal,
So I can see you walking in the distance,
You’re walking upside down,
And the sky is your pavement,
I wanted to shout your name,
“NONNERS NONNERS!”
And in that second,
It was like I broke the safety of silence,
A thousand red eyes,
And sharp claws,
Came straight at me,
Like the spear you jaggedly shoved through my heart,
When you held the gun to your head.
I curled up in a ball,
And closed my eyes real tight,
A prayer to help me out,
I reached out and opened my eyes,
And you were there holding my hand,
Your cold touch sent me shivering into
A bolt of all the memories you left behind,
The light came back and my vision was normal,
But you were gone,
Yet I can still feel the chill of sadness you left on me.
And I will never see you again,
Except in pictures,
And that day when you touched me,
You weren’t sent from heaven,
Suicide goes to hell,
I was going to grab you,
And tell you to put the gun down,
But when you knew what I was thinking,
The shot was how you vanished and left me here,
And I hate you so much for it,
Why couldn’t I stop you?
You were already dead,
A demon come to visit me,
Take me back to the past,
How could my life end so fast?
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AtomicPromIse
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2005-04-04 21:41:33]
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Re: A Demon Come to Visit Me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 09:48:41 PM AEST
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| This is really heartfelt and sad. I'm sorry for your loss. I know somewhat how it feels...and the the knowledge of never knowing why...very nice job. |
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Re: A Demon Come to Visit Me
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by FearMyRawr on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 09:56:43 PM AEST
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| I'm sorry you had to go through that loss, but don't blame yourself, he knows you care, even in death. |
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