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Enternal In Me
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 09:41:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My heart skiped a beat when I saw you
The moments we had will last an eternity
As all I could do was say I love you
And keep the tears burning in me
The agony was beyond my sence of feel
Yet the memory will last forever more
All the pain ment nil
For all was beyond numb, but my core
My eyes, they could'nt deceive me
As the pain they saw in your eyes
When you could'nt say a word to me
Was the point that I could have cried
...
But this wont be the last time we see
For my love for you is immortal
And you are always enternal
In me...
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
... [
2005-04-04 21:41:22]
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Re: Enternal In Me
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 10:13:25 PM AEST
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| you are eternally delusional if you think this sucked. seems so weird to type that word considering i hardly use it. life is a lesson, some fail it, and some pass it with flying colors. for your, failure is not an option. im surprised you brought this poem to my attention since you are afraid of bad comments from me now =] |
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Re: Enternal In Me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 04:01:08 AM AEST
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Now, here, I've really got to point out the rhyme and rhythm.
S T U N N I N G . (get the point? :p)
Very well expressed, and flowed beautifully.....
Don't make me start envying you now :o
~kt |
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Re: Enternal In Me
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by Zeldianus on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 12:00:53 PM AEST
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| i really like this one. if only i could find someone to call my own like that... |
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