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The Girl we can't see

Contributed by savedbydeath on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 08:59:28 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Everything burns
no matter how much she learns
and how many turns
life she believes she yearns

No one knows who she can be
such beauty
but she can't seem to see
she sees her life as stormy

(chorus)
she shines
but shes cries
she never tries
she believes all the lies
she dont understand the miles
we have two different lifestyles
but theres always smiles

she my best friend
but she makes pretend
i want it to end
its a pithetic trend

how can she live like this
does she miss

is she going to be ok
listening to what shes got to say
taking all day
but thats ok

i love her
but for the better
she should change her lifestyle
and take that extra mile

she makes me feel angry
just trying to make her happy
she makes me feel like a zombie
when she dresses trashie

lord help my friend
make the sadness end
dont make her go through it again
shes acten like shes ten

No one knows who she can be
such beauty
but she can't seem to see
she sees her life as stormy

(chorus)
she shines
but shes cries
she never tries
she believes all the lies
she dont understand the miles
we have two different lifestyles
but theres always smiles

Copyright © savedbydeath ... [ 2005-04-04 20:59:28]
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Re: The Girl we can't see (User Rating: 1 )
by cheech on Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 06:24:54 PM AEST
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its only jess,y should we care if she dont?

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