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My Breath
Contributed by
FlirtQueen
on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 08:19:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I turned my head
and took a breath
without my life
what chaos would occur
for every person in the world
they have a special place in someones heart
wether you believe you are loved or not
someone out there is meant for you
don't leave this world with regret
because without your breath
I breathe alone.
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FlirtQueen
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2005-04-04 20:19:04]
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Re: My Breath
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by POETICALLY-INCLINED on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 08:21:14 PM AEST
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| Thats a serious thought poem and I loved it. You go girl and keeo doing your thing cause I loved your poem. |
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Re: My Breath
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by lost13 on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 09:48:23 PM AEST
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| i have to agree with POETICALLY-INCLINED, it was a thought poem, but i know what you mean. sometimes i think the same thing. |
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Re: My Breath
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 06:34:30 PM AEST
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Re: My Breath
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 06:35:21 PM AEST
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i meant to write something
...oops
but anyway
i thought the poem lacked
it was an ok poem
but it couldve been written better |
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