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Lament (On An Un-named Woman)
Contributed by
Urizen
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Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 06:25:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Two star shimmer in her eyes,
Plucked from the jealous sky,
Put in place by some great, guiding hand,
For the benefit and joy of all mankind,
Her nose; A banquet of nothing,
Her face lights up my life,
Her body curves like an hourglass,
It brings tears to my eyes.
Copyright ©
Urizen
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2005-04-04 18:25:51]
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Re: Lament (On An Un-named Woman)
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 06:39:43 PM AEST
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Simple theme, but well spoken. Vivid, and I like the last line.
Keep it up.
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Re: Lament (On An Un-named Woman)
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by Ineedanap on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 01:05:47 AM AEST
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Very sweet, short and simple poem. I liked it
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Re: Lament (On An Un-named Woman)
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by Adonia_Donata on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 03:32:14 PM AEST
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| beautiful...so very sweet. |
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Re: Lament (On An Un-named Woman)
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by PolarBear on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 12:22:40 PM AEST
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| Hey your poem was good I am surprised not more people read it. Hey if you get the chance check out my poem the title is BYE. Thanks. |
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