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The Foreshadow
Contributed by
sicknivesevered
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Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 05:46:27 PM in AEST
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Lost inside myself; more than ever now
I can't think straight; I just repeat the vow
Staring at the ground; looking at the past
Sorting memories; how long will they last?
As I glance up and see the foreshadow
Foreign and blunt; morbidly shallow
I suppose its for the best; only the weak need rest
But how can I say this when I failed the tests?
NO SUPPORT
I can taste the grey and the red mix together
It seems so RIGHT
AND UTTERLY FLAWLESS
But the pain won't subside
As my tongue turns to leather
What am I doing here?
(************!)
Why do I even care?
(************!)
TELL ME
I need you to believe
I need you to see
Tired, burnt, and sore; so demanding
Search inside myself for understanding
What the ***** am I trying to do?
Three things at once; I'm so confused
Mirror the martyr to see it all again
Overdose of reality to comprehend
All I've got is a summer of pain
And a fall of hardships to obtain
NO SUPPORT
I can taste the grey and the red mix together
It seems so RIGHT
AND UTTERLY FLAWLESS
But the pain won't subside
As my tongue turns to leather
What am I doing here?
(************!)
Why do I even care?
(************!)
TELL ME
I need you to believe
I need you to see
WHAT AM I SMILING FOR?
THERE'S NOTHING LEFT
EVERYTHING RAPED AND GONE
INVOKING THEFT
NOTHING TO LOOK FORWARD TO
JUST, DEATH
TO ALL MY HOPES AND DREAMS
BY MY OWN BREATH
A summer of pain
A fall of hardships
A winter of uncertainty
Will you be there?
Or am I alone?
This lack of support
Frightens me
IS THIS NOT
WHAT I NEED?
THIS IS NOT
WHAT I PERCEIVED
Copyright ©
sicknivesevered
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2005-04-04 17:46:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Foreshadow
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rocks on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 04:27:05 AM AEST (User
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wow, very strong writing. a lament with a very good rhythm and the rhyme doesn't seem artificial at all. "a summer of pain" - I think I've used a line like that in one of my german poems before. |
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Re: The Foreshadow
(User Rating: 1 ) by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 5th April 2007 @ 10:12:48 PM AEST (User
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Powerful and it jumps off the page. This was good. I like all of your lyrics they are really good. I love the 2nd to last stanza. Great lyrics.
Take care
Christina |
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