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led balloons
Contributed by
ipanema_gal
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Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 05:00:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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its not as though
i expected to see
anything revolve around me
its not as though i expected it to live
but it did
like the ice cube from hell
the passion of silence
shared between expressions
of ours only
how surprised i was
when i realized
my hopes had not fallen
like led balloons
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2005-04-04 17:00:52]
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Re: led balloons
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ineedanap on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 01:01:38 AM AEST
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Captivating. nice write. Short and simple...
Brooke |
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Re: led balloons
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by Adonia_Donata on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 03:27:19 PM AEST
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| wow, definetly intriguing. loved it actually. hey, if you can, fix the title. will attract more people |
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