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Paths
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 03:49:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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I've wandered off this path in the past
And the happiness I found didn't last
But I'm standing at this edge once more
Haven't I learned this lesson from before?
And there she stands, reaching out
Now I know what she's talking about
She loves me, just as I'm in love with her
Everything but she and me is a blur
I know He stands at the end of this road
Ready to take from me my entire load
If I look to him, this decision is made
And my love for her will slowly fade
If I ask for help, He would grant me anything
But I'm not sure I want the help He'd bring
He loves me more then He could show
But it's not something I feel, it's what I know
I look again to her, and this time I hesitate
Those blurs around me are trying to communicate
I can't quite make out what they're saying
Something about not going, something like "staying"
I see her standing where she's always been
I battled this darkness between us before, didn't win
I'm working up the courage to try this again
So Her love can take this heart... and it can mend
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Re: Paths
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 12:10:19 AM AEST
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| This poem is filled with lots of emotions. When I read it i see a person standing at a mirror looking at herself trying to make a good decision. That kind of poem is always a great one. |
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Re: Paths
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by DarkFaerie on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 09:07:13 PM AEST
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I've wandered off this path in the past
And the happiness I found didn't last
But I'm standing at this edge once more
Haven't I learned this lesson from before?
these lines speak deeply to me. fantastic write. : ) |
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