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false satisfaction
Contributed by
bttrflynajar
on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 02:52:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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Your sending chills up my spine
pulling me into your decieving lips
i seal this moment, that we intertwine
and your hands move down my hips
Its more than erotic the way you move about me
yet i know its not love ; your words i wont ever forget
but im a pretender in my canvas world you cant see
where Bright red is the only color my heart will get
and oceans of turqoise run through like the waters in your eyes
beautiful red roses of deciet run ten feet high
Black grass is the forsaken land where i forget about your lies
Step into my world baby, does it satisfy?
I could go on to please your every mood
telling you im alright with being a fake
Adding paint to my canvas to cover the crude
to cover the truth, my feelings i foresake
But somethings burning deep inside
ive tried to kill it's need
but i can't kill my pride
and i cant overtake the seed
You planted it so deep into my heart
so deep, that no shovel will ever dig it out
i have to save myself ; so we must part
and the saving begins with this one shout
False satisfaction is no way to please
I love you too much to let your love be my tease.
So heres my Last Goodbye tonight
and from there on out, this canvas shall run white.
Copyright ©
bttrflynajar
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2005-04-04 14:52:23]
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Re: false satisfaction
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 03:05:45 PM AEST
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You packed a lot of emotion into this one my friend.
Well done
Larry |
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Re: false satisfaction
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by hotrod55 on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 03:21:14 PM AEST
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| i love it so much its so true to the feeling of false love. congrats i give it 5 stars |
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