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Calm Before the Storm
Contributed by
Rakerman1999
on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 02:48:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The storms of life are soon to rage
but now 'tis calm and still
A moment for the deepest breath
renewing of the will
For morn' will find those wicked winds
in gales to rend the soul
Come blowin' with the rising sun
and taking bitter toll
The stars dance in the winter skies
I relish in the peace
So soon the clouds will gather near
and all their hell release
Let this be now my time of rest
these hours before the blow
To sleep, to dream of heaven's quiet
before fate's wrath, I know
L. Carling c2005
Copyright ©
Rakerman1999
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Re: Calm Before the Storm
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by Archie on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 02:52:00 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem. You truly have a way of describing the ebbing of tranquil and the accent of trials. |
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Re: Calm Before the Storm
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by shelby on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 02:53:35 PM AEST
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so nice to see another wonderful write my friend Iv missed you
Michelle |
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Re: Calm Before the Storm
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by bttrflynajar on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 02:54:24 PM AEST
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this is an absolutely beautiful poem
speechless.
- BttrfLy |
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Re: Calm Before the Storm
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 03:28:27 PM AEST
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wonderful...
Shari |
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Re: Calm Before the Storm
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 04:14:31 PM AEST
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Larry, this was just incredible.
I agree with Archie you do have a way of describing you're emotions.
I just love this.
Jane |
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Re: Calm Before the Storm
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 04:19:13 PM AEST
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Yikes! What are you expecting???
LOL I hope its not as bad as you're making it sound!
Well constructed piece, full of meaning...It's great to have you back!!!
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Re: Calm Before the Storm
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 07:28:04 PM AEST
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Simply amazing!!!
Wow!
Jenni |
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Re: Calm Before the Storm
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by vibes2go on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 11:34:50 PM AEST
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I'm so relieved to see your name again..no worries..I'm on a wonderful site. Rarely here..but if you'd like to visit and see it, timebot and daniela are there too.. its wonderful.
http://allpoetry.com/
No storm..I'm glad you're writing again.. thanks..it warms my heart, and brings tears to my eyes..bye..
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Re: Calm Before the Storm
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 12:35:54 AM AEST
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Wow beautiful I pray that the storm does not
find you however, but yeah this was just...
beautiful.
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Re: Calm Before the Storm
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 08:09:35 AM AEST
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there are no words to describe this write, only that it is AMAZING
wow it was so perfect
pix xx |
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Re: Calm Before the Storm
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 08:27:13 AM AEST
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I always get images in my mind when I read your poetry. In this one I saw a captain writing in a captain's log, knowing a storm was coming on.
I think your poetry is so perfectly written that is allows us all to see many, many, things.
Impressed as always.
Kie |
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Re: Calm Before the Storm
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 11:35:09 AM AEST
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A wonderful metaphor depicting the transitions between our serenity and the other more turbulent times. Beautiful style and flow. I can feel the anticipation and emotion.
Well done
Will |
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Re: Calm Before the Storm
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 04:42:08 PM AEST
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I like this one especially. It resonates, since I often feel the same. Excellent form, truly excellent.
bravo!
Andrew |
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Re: Calm Before the Storm
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 02:19:34 PM AEST
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Yet another wonderful piece by you, as always this is so captivating and some thing that echos in the back of my mind..as always
~Clark |
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