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At Rest
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 12:33:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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My mind is finally having a rest,
Soon it’ll be functional & back to its best,
Too long has it been battered,
Now it’s trying to piece together all the tatters.
Thoughts no longer whiz around my head,
But my thinking is now more rational instead,
I know the healing process has only just begun,
& that my race has not yet been run.
I will face my demons once & for all,
Maybe it won’t hurt as much when I fall,
My mind has suffered in my short years,
& it has felt every single falling tear.
I tried to battle on alone for too long,
Feeling isolated, like I didn’t belong,
Mind was trapped in an emotional tornado,
Torment & torture crept over me so slow.
I have taken the vital first steps,
It’ll be a long time before my mind can forget,
All the hurt & pain it has been through,
Maybe now at rest my mind won’t feel so blue.
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pixie
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2005-04-04 12:33:53]
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Re: At Rest
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by Willofree on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 12:41:07 PM AEST
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Bravo! Good for you, as this is a positive write full of hope and opportunity. Good rhyme scheme and flow
Well done,
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Re: At Rest
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by xtremcalibur on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 12:44:11 PM AEST
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| Thanks to your poem, I feel a bit better, Knowing that someone is making an honest effort to heal. I applaud you because it takes strength to begin a long and hard journey. I am behind you in your quest. Thank you for a very beautiful write. |
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Re: At Rest
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 01:22:20 PM AEST
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Your poems get better and better, hun. Everytime I read them.
I love the tornado part, if it wasn't so sad.
Great write sweetie,
*hugs* Phil |
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Re: At Rest
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 02:01:07 PM AEST
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A very comforting and sweet poem pix, i wish
u a gentle recovery and an easy poetic path . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: At Rest
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 02:08:06 PM AEST
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Baby steps my friend, baby steps.
This was beautiful
Roses
Larry |
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Re: At Rest
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 05:29:00 PM AEST
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Yes, this write itself shows the healing has begun.
Thank you for all the great comments on my writes and if you ever need an ear, you know where to find me.
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Re: At Rest
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 01:11:45 AM AEST
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Really positive write, Pix...Keep working at it... You'll get there soon...
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