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Weeping Child
Contributed by
zaknafein8891
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Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 11:53:03 AM in AEST
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What’s wrong, weeping child?
Why are you in this corner,
And not out at play?
Are you hurt, weeping child?
Worry not, wounds heal,
And time will take the pain away.
Why are you alone, weeping child?
Are you lost,
Or perhaps you’ve gone astray?
Take heart weeping child,
I’m a weeping child too.
I wish so bad to aid you,
But I can’t give what I don’t
Have… after all, what could a
Weeping child do.
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2005-04-04 11:53:03]
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Re: Weeping Child
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by chrismahoney on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 08:45:08 AM AEST
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Not sure what this poem was about....it's Original....but, it's originality is what made me confused, reading the poem was frustrating in some sense, I read it 3times, trying to get some sense in what you were trying to convey, I'll look at your other poems and see where I'll go from there.
I hope you appreciate my honesty. |
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Re: Weeping Child
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by Ineedanap on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:31:39 AM AEST
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| Hmmm... I'm pretty sure i understood what you were saying. Well, depending what point of view, this could be interpreted many ways from abuse to abandonement. I'm not sure if i'm write but i took it as abandonement. Sorry if i got it wrong. Good write |
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Re: Weeping Child
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by vox on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 04:22:08 PM AEST
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| very touching. and it seems (if im correct)m that whatever u mean here, has happenned to u. be strong |
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