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The Question
Contributed by
Kevin
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Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 11:36:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The Question
I ask myself, why does it have to be this way
To struggle with this life day after day
To be ridiculed, mocked, emotionally hurt
Bruised, abused, and kicked in the dirt
People who I thought were a friend
People I would have cared for till the end
People whom with I could laugh and sing a song
But all these thoughts were terribly wrong
This leaves a question deep in my mind
One that I think about all the time
Should I feel pity and end my life
Easily it’s over, this tireless strife
A couple of pills, a bullet in the head
A slit of my wrist and I’ll be dead
Or I can live my life and have some fun
Revenge is what will quell my infuriation
Slowly but surely, this could be great
This can release my pent up hate
Suicide or revenge...both will send me to Hell
Which will I chose…only time could tell
Copyright ©
Kevin
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2005-04-03 23:36:45]
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Re: The Question
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by mylady on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 12:01:49 AM AEST
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All i can't say is keep on living. revenge leave it too god he know what best for them.At least
you know who are your friends are and you know it. About the poem is sad never stop of having friend one day you will find one who is true friend.. |
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Re: The Question
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 12:40:43 AM AEST
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Well written. The peice flows well, and all. Twas deffinitly sad, however.
I've been in a place similair to this, and both suicide and revenge sound sweet, but suicide hurts everyone around you, and revenge, well, it depends what type of revenge.
Just keep your head up, it will eventually seem or even get better.
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Re: The Question
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by inoc on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 07:40:03 AM AEST
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Some lines in your poem felt familiar to me too...Revenge or Suicide will make things worse ...so try to just hold tight!....[around this long corner-you may find a beautiful tomorrow Kevin
cheers!~ |
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