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Never Again
Contributed by
breny
on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 07:26:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Here I am alone
another lesson learned
How come I"m always
the one to get burned?
Nothing lasts forever
it all has an end
I really don't think
I can just be your friend
The way that I felt
the things that we did
All my emotions
I just can't rid
I'll honestly try
but I promise you this
never again will our lips
share a kiss
Never again
Will I feel your embrace
And never again
will my hand feel your face
Those eyes I could stare at
and dream of at night
are just another weakness
in this losing fight
All of these things
I will miss without a doubt
but at least now I know
what true love is all about
Copyright ©
breny
... [
2005-04-03 19:26:09]
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Re: Never Again
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 07:32:02 PM AEST
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A sad and telling tale about love in the realm
of a broken heart . . . (((((4 breny )))))
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Never Again
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by zaknafein8891 on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 08:09:39 AM AEST
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This poem brought tears to my eyes... it made me think of a girl I used to know...
...after all the pain we face all thats left is to walk on and keep writing... |
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Re: Never Again
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 11:57:00 AM AEST
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wow!
Sda but fraught with lesson and clarity.
Great flow and wrap yp too.
I'm sorry you're hurting, but awsome job on this! |
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Re: Never Again
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by mina-1 on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 05:46:18 PM AEST
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Aww Brenna this brought tears to my eyes.
A sad, heart breaking and emotional write.
I sense ur pain and suffering my dear friend. Hang tuff and may ur heart be healed real soon. A sad, but very well written and expressed poem. So sorry for ur loss hun.
Hundreds of heartfelt hugs for u,
~Sue~ |
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Re: Never Again
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by fielding88 on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 05:48:52 PM AEST
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| wow, your emotions really scream out in this write, it's so easy to know the way you were feeling and what mindset u were in when u wrote it, etc. The word u used to rhyme were also cleverly chosen, and it's glad to see a sort of positive end to this one. Another amazing write Brenna : ) |
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