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That's wonderful love......
Contributed by
ravisada
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Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:49:38 AM in AEST
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How wonderful to win your heart with a smile
How wonderful to kiss your lips with hopeful
How wonderful to get your heart with love
How wonderful to see your soul in me
How wonderful to laugh with your sweet words
How wonderful to hold you tight and kiss gently
How wonderful to fly with you to the dream land
How wonderful to drive you through the mountain valleys
How wonderful to be with you within four walls
How wonderful to give you what you look for
How wonderful to hug you and keep you in my arms
How wonderful to wear our wedding rings on our wedding day
How wonderful to bind your love to last for ever
Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
Copyright @2005 Ravi Sathasivam
Copyright ©
ravisada
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2005-04-03 08:49:38]
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Re: That's wonderful love......
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by pixie on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:50:18 AM AEST
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Very sweetly written,
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Re: That's wonderful love......
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:58:16 AM AEST
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| It was a good write, but i found the first two words at the begining of each sentences got on my nerves. but a good poem . (just my opinion) |
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Re: That's wonderful love......
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 09:57:13 AM AEST
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I do agree about the first too lines.. I think it was a little repetetive.
Still, it is a lovely poem. Full of feeling and hope.
Great write,
Phil |
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