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Holey World
Contributed by
desireemiote
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Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 12:50:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Here is a world
That is missing
Missing something
Missing someone
Missing morals
Missing values
Missing all
Yet claims to have all
And we
The few
See it
For all it has got
Without overlooking its downfalls
Copyright ©
desireemiote
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2005-04-03 00:50:24]
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Re: Holey World
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by dreamer_4_eternity on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 01:10:24 AM AEST
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Yes, the world is missing something... I can't figure out what it is either, but the world is on a fast paced race to success, and it is lacking the passion and art it needs to actually be happy... it's like they all want professional success, and they think that the world has everything and they need to chase after it, and very few of us see the world for what it really is, but what we see somewhat saddens us.
This was a great write, and flowed very well, and it was so nice to read this, thanks for posting! |
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Re: Holey World
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:25:05 AM AEST
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| good job |
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Re: Holey World
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by Jane_Doe on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 01:16:54 AM AEST
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| This poem made a great point and said what you wanted it to so well. This world is missing so much and is trying to fix it the wrong way. Great write. |
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Re: Holey World
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by Ineedanap on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 01:34:18 AM AEST
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Nicely Written short poem. I liked
Brooke |
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