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48hours of sorrow
Contributed by
tin
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Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 11:35:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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It's been seventy-two hours and eighteen minutes,
Since I last saw your face.
Without you here this world is empty,
It's such a lonely place.
After ten hours I thought I could take it,
I knew you'd be back in a few short days.
But every second feels like a minute,
And every minute feels like a decade.
A full day has passed,
And my will has grown weak,
It's just not enough,
To hear you speak.
Now a second day has passed and i'm crying inside,
And your not around to wipe away the tears.
Now I long for the day after tomorrow,
When I can hold you and rid myself of these fears.
Now a third day has past,
And I see that my sorrow was nothing more than jest.
Because now all that stands between our love,
Is a good nights rest.
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tin
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2005-04-02 23:35:52] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: 48hours of sorrow
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 03:28:52 PM AEST (User
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I can hear every word your poem speaks. I have spent those lonely hours.
You have a nice approach to sharing the love to your lover.
*****Because now all that stands between our love,
Is a good nights rest.
Rest cures.. to be able to stand one more day.. One more day less from the pains of sorrow and of lonliness.
Beautiful write here my friend.
Raquel Leah ; )) |
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