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My Request
Contributed by
reflections
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Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 11:29:11 PM in AEST
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Come lightly,
as on wings of silk.
Unwelcome though you be.
Stand Quietly,
and I will know
that you have come for me.
Be Gentle,
when you touch my lips
and take away my breath.
Be merciful,
as I accept
that moment known as death.
5-4-73
John F. Templin ©
©1997
Copyright ©
reflections
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2005-04-02 23:29:11]
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Re: My Request
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by TheVoice on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 11:47:34 PM AEST
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An amazing work of art.
The Voice
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Re: My Request
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:09:45 AM AEST
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Yes indeed, a rare and exceptional work of art with which we all identify,-and a theme the fulfilment of which we all pray.to be realized.
Superb!
AMDG
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Re: My Request
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:49:33 AM AEST
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| wow..well done |
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Re: My Request
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 01:13:10 PM AEST
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A masterpiece in its own right, John....
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Re: My Request
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by greeneyes on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 10:31:08 PM AEST
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Wow! So few words and yet so vivid, excellent.
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Re: My Request
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 02:56:50 AM AEST
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Great writing but I hope u arn't planning on checking out any time soon.
huggs,
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