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Untitled
Contributed by
LaDyD
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Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 10:19:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I never thought i'd be in a position like this
Who do you really like me or my sis?
She doesn't want me to be with you
She's always stuck to us just like glue
She cant find her own so she goes after mine
If that's what you really want then that's just fine,
Just tell me, and i'll leave you alone
but tell it to my face, and not on the phone
I don't know if it's you to blame
Now that i think of it you two are the same
It's like, do you really enjoy to hurt me?
When the hell will i wake up and see?
I shouldn't be treated in this way
I have to be strong and just walk away.
Copyright ©
LaDyD
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2005-04-02 22:19:58]
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Re: Untitled
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by TheVoice on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 10:56:20 PM AEST
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"Case of Mistaken Identity"
Great write. I hope this is not true, if it is, I whish for you to be happy soon.
The Voice
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Re: Untitled
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by enamat on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 10:06:46 AM AEST
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| Not bad at all. I would call this simply "Stuck". you managed to express your hurt and anger , and that's always good. |
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Re: Untitled
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by O7NeVeS on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 01:32:46 AM AEST
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| Good job on expressing ur feelings. Can't wait for you to start writing happy poems. TD |
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