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My Battle
Contributed by
breny
on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 09:58:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Everywhere I go
and everything I see
will not let me forget
it makes me want to scream
I'm being suffocated
there's nothing I can do
every corner that I turn
I'm reminded of you
Our memories surround me
every room that I'm in
There's no way to escape it
a battle I can't win
Everything goes black
as I crumple to the floor
but I have yet to find
what my dreams may have in store
to be continued. . .
Copyright ©
breny
... [
2005-04-02 21:58:38]
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Re: My Battle
(User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 01:41:51 AM AEST
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Nice excitment to it i'll be there 4 part 2 . . .
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Re: My Battle
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by enamat on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 10:13:40 AM AEST
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| it's strong writing ... i like it so far and it feels like you have a few things to add |
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Re: My Battle
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by fielding88 on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 05:46:18 PM AEST
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| This seems so cathartic for u, and u wrote it brilliantly. There's also obviously so much more you can write on this topic, and if you're like me, u could write volumes about it :P Great write! : ) |
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