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Who Is She
Contributed by
BEBE
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Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 09:39:40 PM in AEST
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Who is this girl standing beside me?
As I stand here, She talks
"Bebe, Your fat No your skinny, turn left, no right."
Why is she talking to me?
"Bebe do something with your self"
GO away STOP talking to me.
She stops!
I walk........
"Bebe stand up straight, head up"
LEAVE ME ALONE
"Bebe see that man walking beside of you?"
yes
"Reach into his pocket, grab his wallet"
Go away!
I start to run, run, faster faster
My heart beating heavily against my chest
Bomp, Bomp, Bomp
I look behind to see if shes there
"Bebe look ahead"
SMACK, In front of me is this unknown girl
she responds
"Bebe, Leave me alone"
and she is gone.
(The words in qutaions are the words of this unknown girl)
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BEBE
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2005-04-02 21:39:40]
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Re: Who Is She
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 09:51:47 PM AEST
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BEBE
Interesting write.We all have that voice inside and think your right it is our conscience,or Gaurdian angel if you will guiding us to the right path.
Keep posting girl yo have much to offer.
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Re: Who Is She
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by Ineedanap on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 07:23:59 PM AEST
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Good write. kept me interested. You have much to offer. I hope to see more of your poems in the future
Brooke |
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Re: Who Is She
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by vox on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 04:25:06 PM AEST
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