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Dying from Love
Contributed by
Faust
on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 08:26:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Love is a very cruel thing, but it is at its worst when people abuse such a feeling. They choose to use it to gain whats wanted, not realizing how much the ones abused are haunted. They choose to play jokes on ones who mean so well, not noticing that after that we go through hell. They are the people who cause us such pain, only thinking of thier personal gain. They make us sit and weep in the rain. Sometimes it's worse, some might feel like they are plagued with a curse, and what to be taken away in a herse. Like they are hated by those who dwell up above, and no longer wish to live cause of thier experience in love. We take lives because of those who ruin ours. We taint our soul to be released from the shackles we've been locked away in. Many say we are fools, and say suicides a sin, but they havent live through the the things we have been. If they went through half the things we did, they would know why we must do what we must. For it does not only free us from the evil of love, but from greed, hatred, jealousy, and lust. That's why so many of us, for better or worse, are dying from love.
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Faust
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Re: Dying from Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by HellsLibrarian on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 08:58:04 PM AEST (User
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bummer. some grammatical and spelling errors, but you got the main idea across, and fitted it into a nice rhyme scheme. |
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