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A Lover's Plea
Contributed by
Rakerman1999
on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 08:19:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Pray, test the grace within this tongue
and give me words both pure and true
for flowered prose can ne'er express
this timeless love I hold for you
'Tis deeply etched upon my soul
in seas of hope as yet uncharted
where I would dare to brave the rocks
that smash ships of the broken hearted
Give heed to this my gentle voice
that speaks in whispers soft but clear
and still the constant hands of time
so I may ever hold you near
Let these my eyes drink in the sight
of perfect beauty's incarnation
and taste the sweetness of your lips
whose touch will be this man's salvation
L. Carling c2005
Copyright ©
Rakerman1999
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Re: A Lover's Plea
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by ForeverAlone on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 08:55:50 PM AEST
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OH....seriously.....you took the words right out of my mouth.....I love this piece...I only WISH I could write something as beautiful as this.....Beyond perfection........
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Re: A Lover's Plea
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by OnAngelswings on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 10:02:22 PM AEST
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| Larry once again this is awsome....I love this, as I do many of yours! ....Shari |
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Re: A Lover's Plea
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 10:03:54 PM AEST
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Wow, Larry!! It's sooooo good to read your love poems again... Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us again...
Jenni |
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Re: A Lover's Plea
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by greeneyes on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 11:03:33 PM AEST
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Beautifully written.
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Re: A Lover's Plea
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 04:27:08 AM AEST
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welcome back rakerman.
Its nice to once again read your poetry.
awsome poem.
karen |
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Re: A Lover's Plea
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by Kie on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:21:02 AM AEST
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There is a texas band that sings a song called "Woman my Salvation" and I could hear that song in my mind instantly when I got to the last verse.
You see things with your eyes, heart, and your deep soul. When you pen them it comes out so eloquently, like you've been given a gift to express.
Never stop writing L.
Kie |
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Re: A Lover's Plea
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by pixie on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:41:38 AM AEST
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heavenly beautiful, amzingly written Larry
pix xx |
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Re: A Lover's Plea
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by n2dep2care on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 12:29:28 PM AEST
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Gentle, touching and wonderful. Nice work!
Laurie |
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Re: A Lover's Plea
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 02:34:58 PM AEST
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A true work of art by a true craftsman i like
style larry, splendid peace of writting . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: A Lover's Plea
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by emystar on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 01:57:54 AM AEST
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Dang I stay so busy but don't know how I missed these incredialy beautifull writes.
Awesome.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: A Lover's Plea
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 10:52:49 AM AEST
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Brushed with a feather so light and i feel like I am floating on air
Beautiful beyond words Larry my friend beautiful
Love Angelxxx |
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