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I'LL NOW BE
Contributed by
sweetoccasion29
on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 07:27:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Did i please you,them,
anyone?
Remnance of heartache,pain
clutching my lungs gripping
my breath
Remote possibilities of happiness
once within reach now fading covered with
distance
Pain accompanied by heartache
paying a visit to an old friend
stealing my life controling my
dreams
Accumulating tears, I now drown, grief overcomes
me,praying once for a new turn,no longer needed
possibly now i'll rest,be forever and at last
at ease
Copyright ©
sweetoccasion29
... [
2005-04-02 19:27:23]
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Re: I'LL NOW BE
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 07:17:38 PM AEST
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beautifully expressed feelings, watch your comma spaces tho:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:-
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Re: I'LL NOW BE
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by johnnywords on
Saturday, 1st December 2007 @ 03:16:59 PM AEST
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| I'll be now... looking forward to reading more. |
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