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Military Man And His Son
Contributed by
TheEarlyNovember
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Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 04:05:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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He hung his head
With a fist against the wall
Said he wants to make
All the difference in this world
Hung my head
I miss you letters sent
I'm sorry I never did realize
The difference you made in my life
Calendar days on Calendar days
Will never bury you in my dreams
Calendar days on Calendar days
You are always buried within me
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2005-04-02 16:05:54]
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Re: Military Man And His Son
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by Archie on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 04:45:54 PM AEST
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| I like this. I don't want to take away from it but it seems that you could have written more. Ofcourse that is my opinion. |
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Re: Military Man And His Son
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 05:13:53 PM AEST
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| great poem |
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