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Understanding Reality
Contributed by
shatteredreflection
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Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 02:23:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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She picks up the shattered glass, wondering where she's at
She senses something strange, but its pitch black
Its cold and dark, no light to see, all alone
The room is circular, like a dome
She feels the hairs rise on the back of her neck
It feels as though she's been kissed, but something pierced her flesh
Lost in the oblivion of uncertanty
Too many times she has awaken from this dream
Never understanding a place reality has never seen
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2005-04-02 14:23:11]
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Re: Understanding Reality
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 02:32:18 PM AEST
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| excellent poem |
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Re: Understanding Reality
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by mickie on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 02:36:08 PM AEST
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| I like it. I have a taste for dark poetry. Even write some myslef. I can sense her pain, her longing to understand reality and what's it all about. very vivid poem, I think. Great job! |
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Re: Understanding Reality
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 02:54:42 PM AEST
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A dark sad write and yet a lot of us can identify with this.
Well done on a poetic achivement.
Jane |
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