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The Dance Of Love
Contributed by
Live2Die
on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 01:28:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Gracious lips, Shining eyes,
Perfect truth, No lies
You are meant, To be mine.
Silver forks, Red wine
Perfect curves, Dancing voice
Glowing lights, A simple choice.
You are meant, To be mine.
Wondrous beauty, You do define.
Look here, See my love
It’s like this, A perfect dove.
You are meant, To be mine
Shivering spine, It is time
Twirling skirts, Petti coats,
Another guy, Sore throats.
You were meant, To be mine
Not his, A fake design.
Walk away, Leave me here
Broken heart, Another tear.
You were meant, To be mine
Never his, It’s a crime.
Out the door, Down the street
Simply gone, Not discreet.
Now I cry, Want to die,
Asking how, And asking why?
Copyright ©
Live2Die
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2005-04-02 13:28:09]
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Re: The Dance Of Love
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 01:31:53 PM AEST
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| It's beautiful.... |
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Re: The Dance Of Love
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by POETICALLY-INCLINED on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 01:39:20 PM AEST
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| I love it, I can relate to you on this poem so much its ridiculous. I loved your poem man, and you are really skilled... |
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Re: The Dance Of Love
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by pixie on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 02:10:06 PM AEST
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that was really beautiful, great flow
pix xx
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Re: The Dance Of Love
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 02:33:56 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem , well done |
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Re: The Dance Of Love
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 02:55:22 PM AEST
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such a wonderful flow and the words just seem to mix in all together.
I liked this, hope to see more soon
Jane |
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Re: The Dance Of Love
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 05:36:01 PM AEST
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| The flow o this one is beautiful, and the words ar great. I think this upbeat writing is at least as good as your other poems, as in great! |
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