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Thoughts of Love
Contributed by
FireStorm12
on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I sat alone at night,
Staring at the stars.
All I could think about,
Was this relationship of ours.
I thanked my lucky star above,
For you are in my life.
I even got down on my knees,
And thanked God you’re my wife.
I wondered if your having fun,
Or if you’re feeling sad.
I thought about you coming home,
And that made me really glad.
I pictured your smiling face,
Within my lonely mind.
I thought about what we would do,
When together we entwined.
I wondered why I felt lonely,
When I had you in my heart.
I realized I’m never alone,
Even we when have to part.
I thought about many things,
While staring at the sky.
Like how I could show to you,
That I love your beautiful eyes.
Perhaps I could find a way,
To explain the chills I get.
Or maybe I could tell to you,
How you hand and mine perfectly fit.
As long as you and I are one,
The world is at our feet.
For you are my one and true soulmate,
You are the reason I am complete.
I went to bed that night,
With my thoughts of only you.
Somewhere in the night I had a dream,
It was about how our love grew.
I hope you take this poem to heart,
And the feelings that lay within.
For when you get back to our home,
We will start our love again.
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FireStorm12
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2002-12-20 23:40:00]
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Re: Thoughts of Love
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 12:07:42 AM AEST
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| Well I personaly like the way you right,So keep it up,Great peice here by the way,very romantic,your wife would melt! Christina |
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Re: Thoughts of Love
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by OreO on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 03:20:54 AM AEST
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Now how in the world could she not take t his poem to heart....my god it's breathtaking.....ok i have somthing to say here and im sureeeeeee your not going to like it but here goes ...ahem....I WANT TO READ EVERY SINGLE ONE OF THOSE 65 POEMS!!!!!! LOL now see it pays to listen to your wife she knew what she was talking about when she told you to post your poems hehe..this really is a beautiful write....i would have cried so hard if someone would have given me a poem like this ...thanks for sharing it...and i will certainly be looking for the next poems so neener neener you gotta write more now LOL...
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