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You Cut So Good
Contributed by
Letters4EvryDay
on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 11:24:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I close my eyes, pretending not to hear
The painful words you said last year.
I replay the images in my head,
But more so, I hear the words that were said.
I fight back the tears and whisper, 'Not tonight'.
I grab my wrist, and hold on tight.
My teeth are clenched, and drops of salt water run down my cheeks.
The pain I heald is dripping down my arm, I feel so weak.
I collapse on the bathroom floor.
And suddenly there's a knock on the door.
I wonder what I was thinking as I slipped away from this world.
With hair so thickly curled,
And eyes so blue,
She had to have one thought so true.
My soul slips away and I see myself lying there, stiff less.
If only, for this once, I wasn't so restless.
I didn't know doing it only once could be so addictive.
Why did I have to be so vindictive?
I close my eyes, pretending not to hear
The painful words you said last year.
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Re: You Cut So Good
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by BEBE on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 12:11:44 PM AEST
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awww thats sad... But great write, it flows really nice.
GODBLESS
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Re: You Cut So Good
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 02:43:55 PM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: You Cut So Good
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 02:51:51 PM AEST
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Excellent write..great flow..loved it...
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