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Sensual Sonnata
Contributed by
reprobate
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Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 11:04:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Moon-painted soft, white and languid
The tight linen scaffold yeilding so gently
Your lithesome presence fires deep desire
Igniting seemingly insatiable want, passion
Displayed in the evening's smoky dark
My lips seek refuge within your silohuetted form
Softly brushing the salty hollows as they're met
Dicovering the husky warmth in a soft moan
Quietly, urgently embraced ardor rises
All-in-one, spreading, waging surrender
Fervently, accepting, the stinging heat within
Our grasp, our clasp, tender, our gasp
Lustily exchanged breath and caresses
Sweet flames, held, fanned and savored
Silent ebony air nurtured and explored
Moon-lit night witness to pleasant exhaustion.
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reprobate
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2005-04-02 11:04:10]
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Re: Sensual Sonnata
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by freckle on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 11:20:34 AM AEST
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What a wonderful write! I loved your imagery and your flow was perfect...I can see them touch, then touch again.....I loved this line...Our grasp, our clasp, tender, our gasp. Great work....extremely sensual.
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Re: Sensual Sonnata
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by pixie on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 12:52:35 PM AEST
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very beautiful
pix xx |
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Re: Sensual Sonnata
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 01:35:35 PM AEST
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| The imagery here is wonderful |
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Re: Sensual Sonnata
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by Sir_Odd87 on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 01:36:57 PM AEST
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| Well written... |
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Re: Sensual Sonnata
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 10:23:24 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful. I don't know why you rewrote it. Would 10 chocolate bars and about about a day buy your time? I have nothing but time and love and faith to share.
Dove |
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Re: Sensual Sonnata
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 2nd September 2007 @ 07:29:45 AM AEST
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Going to take a cold shower. *smiles* Wow, Michael you have got a way with words. This was beautiful in every way.
Peace, love and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Sensual Sonnata
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 28th May 2014 @ 02:31:27 PM AEST
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sigh... damn! you write romance beautifully!
hugs n' love nessa
@->>->--
*have that with your spagetti mopey pants
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